Progress

How's it going on writing the sequel to First, you ask? After that flash of inspiration while you were running, it’s been strangely silent, you say. Great question and astute observation, Gentle Reader. The short answer: going very well. The longer answer: I’ve been busy ripping and replacing every other chapter of what I’d written. The story has two narrators, one of which I changed the situation and consequences from the end of the first chapter forward. I already like it better, which is a good sign. I wrote some brainstorming notes before beginning the revisions and once I started writing, deviated immediately. They were good deviations, though, upping the danger and tension as well as creating repercussions in the alternating chapters from the other narrator’s POV. I don’t know if that explains it very well, but all that to say, it’s progressing and I’m much happier with the story itself.