Rewrite

I received an email yesterday that the eBook proofs for First are ready for review. That’s pretty exciting. It’s going to take a little effort on my part, so I’m going to stop my review of Next Time, where I’m rewriting the last chapter. When I was out for a walk on Tuesday I pondered weak points in the book, or parts where I still felt uncomfortable with the scene. Since I’m not paying an editor for this one I went through the mental exercise of identifying those nagging thoughts in my brain that kept telling me something could be better. I had those thoughts with First and when I spoke with my editor she put clarity to those thoughts. I learned from that experience and hope it will help make the book better.